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Fresh Start

I thought I’d give this blogging thing an honest shot, especially now that I essentially work in a story factory…

So its almost midnight, and I’m helping a four hundred pound woman stand up.

Its almost midnight and I’m holding the dress of a four hundred pound woman up above her shoulder.

Its almost midnight and I’m holding a four hundred pound woman’s dress up so that her nurse can remove her diaper.

Its almost midnight, and as soon as I get done helping the four hundred pound woman with the diaper and the extremely pungent urine, I can go home.  The wonderful world of modern medicine…

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  1. March 5th, 2011 at 11:26 | #1


    I dig the reiterative language, but I can’t help but think that it’d be helpful to have each sentence be on its own line. Could be wrong. Just some input. Either way, I dig it!

    Btw, ZackRocks.com is officially registered for another year from now. Woot.

    Great seeing u the other day. Thanks for dealing with my ultimate traffic fail.

    Love you mucho, brother.

  2. Zack Rocks
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:23 | #2


    Thanks for reading and for the input, man! I edited, see if that helps. I did not achieve quite the effect I was going for, but thank you for noticing the attempt.

    Thanks for stopping by!

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